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Tuesday, 21 May 2013

Writing by Trey

I can see Lucy and Granddad.  Lucy asked Granddad about his wrinkles. She said his wrinkles were scrunchy like paper.
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  1. Unknown23 May 2013 at 13:17

    I love the way you describe the wrinkles as scrunchy.

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  2. Whaea Kelland29 May 2013 at 08:59

    Helloo Trey
    I am the principal of a little country school called Rongotea.
    I agree with Miss Inglis, you have decribed granddad's wrinkles very well, it makes your writing interesting to read.

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